ext_102423 (
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2008-12-05 01:11 am (UTC)
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Also the scansion/rhythm on the last line of Bel Air segment doesn't really scan for me. I can see how the delivery could salvage it, but it's no good faking it on the last line of the poem.
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Also the scansion/rhythm on the last line of Bel Air segment doesn't really scan for me. I can see how the delivery could salvage it, but it's no good faking it on the last line of the poem.