ext_216297 ([identity profile] skonen-blades.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] skonen_blades 2010-03-29 07:18 pm (UTC)

yes, totally. This was more the fleshing out of the idea. I wanted to switch to first person but it felt like too much of a gear change and then i didn't really have time to retrofit the whole thing but I agree. I'll rewrite it with that in mind.
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