Date: 5 Mar 2009 19:58 (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow! This one is definitly more connected, good job.

Couple of typo's though, "The planes is kicked around" and "carry five hundred us". I'm just nitpicking though...

I love this line: "I know that the principles of aerodynamics are ruled by lift and thrust. I believe the same is true for love."
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