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My days are numbered but they’re all out of order. I’m shuffled.

I can see it in their eyes. My friends carry me like pall bearers. My whole world is an emergency room. I’m a bridge rusting away to scars. I feel like an old folks home filled with birthdays no one remembers.

There are those for whom the deeper valleys of feeling will remain uninhabited. Sex will be athletic and fun for them, most poetry worth a raised eyebrow. They’ll do fine. A collection of evolutionary dead ends, throwbacks, and ceiling fans that make up most of the populace.

I clutch advice and courage close to my chest and feel the broken-motorboat generator that teaches my soul to sing. Some faces are timeless.

I saw her small-town mouth of flowers and I felt like I was a contestant on “so you think you can speak?” In the same way that skydiving is a controlled fall, her voice was a controlled scream. I loved our little place, the island of when we talked.

She spoke to parts of me that had never been addressed.

I feel the air for Braille. I tap out morse-code nightmares in the dark. There are souls swirling around without a compass pushing through the streets.




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Date: 22 Sep 2008 20:00 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] molasses.livejournal.com
I love that sad/falling feeling in it.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 20:03 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skonen-blades.livejournal.com
Yeah. I'm actually having a great day. I'm not sure where this came from but there you go. I wanted it to have a point or a destination but it didn't happen. It just became this evocative little emotional snippet. I'm glad you liked the feeling in it.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 20:06 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] molasses.livejournal.com
it's ... got a catastrophic vibe. and inspires the desire to wrap a blanket around the dude.
but he'll keep falling anyway.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 21:30 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skonen-blades.livejournal.com
Yes, but he'd be cozier as he fell. : )

Date: 22 Sep 2008 23:33 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] molasses.livejournal.com
ha.
excellent.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 20:20 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themythicalman.livejournal.com
I really like this, and I'm finding the first two paragraphs to be particularly poignant. I'm envious of your ability to weave words together). Thank-you.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 21:29 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skonen-blades.livejournal.com
I appreciate that a lot. Thank you very much.

Date: 22 Sep 2008 23:21 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themythicalman.livejournal.com
You're welcome. :-)

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