Hey there! This is a neat little slice-of-life story from the point of view of a guy who has five clones join his high school. See how it all goes down. What do you think would happen?
That's a good idea. I proofread these before I send them in, I swear I do. The 'the/they' thing is something that trips me up a lot. One of those things my brain doesn't notice when I skim it.
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Date: 19 Jan 2009 18:20 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19 Jan 2009 18:26 (UTC)Of course, nobody really cares except us perfectionists. Your vision was transmitted effectively, and that's all that counts.